This photo was taken the year 2008 in a vacation whit my family and my boyfriend in the south of the country, in Villarrica, at the lake Todos los Santos. I remember that day as the most happy of that vacation, because my family and I were all together laughing and relaxing all the day.
The picture shows the foots of my mother, her sister Rosy and my cousin Nicolas, whit their respectives sandals . I remember that day very often because my mother is a kind of artist and made a painting of this picture that she put it in the living room of my house, so when I arrive home every day the first I see is that painting. I like this picture very much because for me represents happines and enjoyment. I love it for another reason too: when I was in that vacation my mother tell me and my family she was pregnant, and I knew inmediatly that the baby would be a girl, and it was a girl! This is the story of my picture, I hope you enjoyed it, bye!
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This photo was taken the year 2008 ON VACATION WITH my family and my boyfriend in the south of the country, in Villarrica, at the lake Todos los Santos. I remember that day as the HAPPIEST of that vacation, because my family and I were all together laughing and relaxing all the day.
The picture shows the fEET of my mother, her sister Rosy and my cousin Nicolas, wITH their respectives sandals . I remember that day very often because my mother is a kind of artist and made a painting of this picture that she put it in the living room of my house, so when I arrive home every day the first I see is that painting. I like this picture very much because for me represents happines and enjoyment. I love it for another reason too: when I was ON that vacation my mother tOLD me and my family she was pregnant, and I knew inmediatly that the baby would be a girl, and it was a girl! This is the story of my picture, I hope you enjoyed it, bye!
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